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Translating across cultures
Linguistic constraints and textual challenges of translating news releases from Italian into English
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Abstract
News releases are the official sources for media professionals and
follow specific rules in terms of content construction and organisation in
English-speaking cultures (. 2008. “Press Releases as a Hybrid Genre: Addressing the Informative/Promotional Conundrum.” Pragmatics Quarterly 18(1): 9–31. ;
Wilcox, Derek. L., and Glen T. Cameron. 2012. Public Relations. Strategies and Tactics. Boston: Allyn & Bacon, Pearson.). It is paramount
that news releases translated into English meet the expectations of their target
international audience(s) (Hatim, Basil. 2009. “Translating text in context.” In The Routledge Companion to Translation Studies, ed. by Jeremy Munday, 36–53. London and New York: Routledge.), in view
of the demand of international organisations and businesses and for those institutions
catering to international audiences to have contents readily available in English. Such
expectations cover the format of the news release (e.g., word number, visual layout), its
content organisation (i.e., the inverted pyramid structure) and their compliance with the
expected textual features of the English target text (e.g., lexical cohesion, syntactic
distribution of the constituents, theme-rheme progression, etc; cf. Halliday, Michael A. K., and Christian M. I. M. Matthiessen. 2014. Halliday’s Introduction to Functional Grammar. London & New York: Routledge. ).
The paper presents a comparison of the features of an example of a
standard news release in Italian with its translation into English. The example under
scrutiny pertains to the specialised discourse of the fashion industry (Swanson, Kristen K., and Judith C. Everett. 2008. Writing for the Fashion Business. London and New York: Bloomsbury. ), which is among the most
globalised and fast-paced industries, and where Made in Italy occupies a prominent
position (Aiello, Gaetano, Raffaele Donvito, Laura Grazzini, and Elisa Petrucci. 2016. “The relationship between the territory and fashion events. The case of Florence and Pitti Immagine fashion fairs.” Journal of Global Fashion Marketing 7 (3): 150–165. ). The aim of the
paper is to advance a proposal for a methodological framework that contributes to break
the cultural barrier created by not meeting the expectations of the English-speaking
target audience of a news release. The paper also aims at stimulating a reflection on the
linguistic and cultural transformations and adaptations that are needed in order to ensure
a dynamic equivalence when translating specialised discourse.
Article outline
- 1.Introduction
- 2.Features of the news release
- 3.Methodological overview
- 3.1Translation studies — selected key theoretical concepts
- 3.2Selected fundamentals of textual organisation
- 3.3Theory U — An overview of the fundamentals
- 3.3.1The stages of the U process
- 4.Integrating translation studies, textual organisation, and complex system design: A theory U-informed approach
- 5.Applying the integrated methodological framework to the source text. Case study: Pitti Fragranze 21 news release
- 5.1Situational analysis: Listening to the source text and sensing its communicative environment
- 5.2Structural analysis: — descending the U and seeing the organisational structure
- 5.3Linguistic analysis: Descending the U and seeing the foundations
- 5.4Presencing: Identifying the core of the text-to-be
- 5.5Crystallising: Strategy formation
- 5.6Prototyping: Towards a motivated target text
- 5.7Performing: Integrating the inverted pyramid structure
- 6.Discussion
- 6.1Critical reflection on findings in relation to research questions
- 6.2Strengths of the proposed framework
- 6.3Limitations and directions for future research
- 7.Concluding remarks
- Author queries
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