The embedding challenge
Developing students’ understandings of ‘theory’ and ‘critique’ on a Sociology writing program
There is a consensus nowadays that the best way to develop students’ academic literacy abilities is within the context of their
studies in the disciplines, an approach known as ‘curriculum embedding’. But despite the demonstrable value of this approach,
surveys of the field in Australia suggest there has been only limited success over the years in integrating embedding pedagogies
into university courses. In the light of this halting progress, there is a need to constantly document initiatives in this area,
both to affirm the principles upon which embedding is founded, as well as to show how these principles can be given practical
effect on programs. This paper provides an account of one such initiative – a collaborative project between Sociology academics
and an academic literacy specialist. The key motif on the project was how the notions of ‘theory’ and ‘critique’ could be made
comprehensible to students in the particular disciplinary context they were working in. We also show that an essential element of
such programs is developing a common language by which pertinent issues can be explored, both among academics and with
students.
Article outline
- 1.Introduction
- 2.Background literature
- 2.1Disciplinary discourses
- 2.2‘Zones’ and ‘thresholds’ in students’ learning
- 3.The project
- 4.Understanding the discourse challenges for students
- 5.The assessment syllabus
- Task 1.‘Private troubles and public issues’ (Writing exercise)
- Task 2.You are a social analyst (Tutorial presentation)
- Task 3.Major essay
- 6.Student responses
- 7.Further ‘zones of development’
- 8.Conclusion
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